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That is a beautiful poem man.
Quite fo...Elliot,<br /><br />That is a beautiful poem man. <br /><br />Quite fondly,<br /><br />Dave S.dave shttp://www.jupitermentorship.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-90523501881277503562012-06-01T10:12:38.526-07:002012-06-01T10:12:38.526-07:00I liked this a bunch! Here is my favorite stanza
...I liked this a bunch! Here is my favorite stanza<br /><br />and some days he goes to a bungalow of dreams<br />then inevitably back to the rehab again<br />he lives halfway between solace and sin<br />i wonder what mysteries lay hidden in the seamsAudrey Howitt aka Divaloungerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06854425983822589062noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-25939334597946557162012-05-31T10:52:17.127-07:002012-05-31T10:52:17.127-07:00This is very good. I especially love the first st...This is very good. I especially love the first stanza, great choices for character descriptions, the goth girl, the zookeeper, and putting the poo and the food in such close proximity stirred up a chuckle or too. moving from narration into reflection was a great touch as well. Very much enjoyed this. ThanksAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05885047796180529498noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-61740865449017167692012-05-30T17:58:41.458-07:002012-05-30T17:58:41.458-07:00@ Other Mary, all of the ones I've posted on h...@ Other Mary, all of the ones I've posted on here do, at least. When it comes to poetry I'm a bit of a traditionalist. Thanks for stopping by and thanks for stopping by.Elliot MacLeod-Michaelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03101422996950773526noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-644724013269641942012-05-30T01:05:20.727-07:002012-05-30T01:05:20.727-07:00The string on MY heart almost broke in half as I r...The string on MY heart almost broke in half as I read this. It conjurs powerful emotions. There is so much sorrow, strength and power in these words. <br /><br />I found the changes in the rhyme scheme perfect for the subject at hand. Well done.Crystal Pistolhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16384208762919600611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-41362268393837319772012-05-29T21:11:03.765-07:002012-05-29T21:11:03.765-07:00If you find out what's hidden in the seams, le...If you find out what's hidden in the seams, let me know. I bet it's something sweet.flip mcflipersonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03075014395015492293noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-83218260433564601392012-05-29T15:07:20.404-07:002012-05-29T15:07:20.404-07:00There are some great lines in this. I found the ch...There are some great lines in this. I found the changes in the rhyme scheme a little distracting though.<br /><br />{ami}<br />http://sundrysumthins.wordpress.com/@amihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17536943954989130887noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-25374336206179206042012-05-29T13:56:53.462-07:002012-05-29T13:56:53.462-07:00Hi Elliot - These are my favorite lines:
'and ...Hi Elliot - These are my favorite lines:<br />'and some days he goes to a bungalow of dreams'<br />'and tommy’s recovery is as tight as his pants'<br />'and tommy is brilliant when it comes to surrender'<br />This is the first poem of yours I have read, I wonder if you always use rhyme or not. I'll snoop around a little and see. Also I went to your other blog (trying to follow good blogger protocol after you left an comment on my blog) and I nearly wet myself laughing. I'd love to read more entries there! <br />Cheers, <br />Other MaryOther Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09189646933597252108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-20075571592791771782012-05-29T05:56:26.562-07:002012-05-29T05:56:26.562-07:00and tommy’s recovery is as tight as his pants
and ...and tommy’s recovery is as tight as his pants<br />and free as his wisdom, and true as his doubt<br /><br />love these lines.JJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09615777330854552040noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-24377645888728331092012-05-29T04:57:25.194-07:002012-05-29T04:57:25.194-07:00he lives halfway between solace and sin...don'...he lives halfway between solace and sin...don't we all eh?Brother Olliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07506492407482879487noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-71021084831557447772012-05-28T22:37:21.059-07:002012-05-28T22:37:21.059-07:00my fave line is: "...when he trained his guit...my fave line is: "...when he trained his guitar strings to wistfully laugh."...<br />:)Teddihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13967940035596403932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4614119547825097328.post-1255814093763771492012-05-28T18:24:11.490-07:002012-05-28T18:24:11.490-07:00Wow, Good brother. The imagery of this one is quit...Wow, Good brother. The imagery of this one is quite good. I can strongly relate to a good portion of this. I do not believe that I had every met this man, but all at the same time- I knew him in archetype. <br />On top of that, I really like the picture you paint of working at a treatment center- it is very accurate, especially at our Alma Mater.<br /><br />All in all, my good man- it tickles the heartstrings, In-deed.Jameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08327412494233204445noreply@blogger.com